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God...is this stuff even correct? Did Cain even actually make a deal with the devil and do all those stuff? I'm not too sure he could only feast on blood and ashes....I really doubt that is true.....I didn't like how you changed everything that probably didn't even really happen. Basically....this whole thing doesn't seem theoretically correct..i'm sorry...it just bugged really badly at that incompetence
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well ofcourse its' not correct in the series I wrote it as fake for the sake of the story
besides im doing a rewrite and fixing up all the story. If you call poetic license incompetent then yeah.
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